Contact MeI wrote a Story
I wrote a story. You can read it here. I am entering a writing contest and if you want to play this game, then let’s play it baby!
I want your honest opinions. I won’t tell you what kind of contest it is so that it doesn’t influence your reading. But I’d appreciate you leave your opinions/criticisms of the story in the comments section.
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Posted: July 25th, 2008 under generation x, rant, the Internetz, writing.
Comments: 4
Comments
Comment from Sluggo
Time: July 25, 2008, 1:41 am
I liked the story. Good characters. Funny. I just hope its not a story to promote the local library. Might not go over real well.
Comment from Anonymous
Time: July 25, 2008, 8:55 am
I clicked the link and i got nothin’
Comment from Goran
Time: July 25, 2008, 4:13 pm
7-and-a-half stars. My favorite part is Olive’s speech at the end, about the product of society. And I love how a girl who gives hand-jobs for cash carries hand lotion with her.
Just a correction: you misspelled frappuccino. Granted it’s a kinda made-up word but since it comes from cappuccino that’s how it’s spelled. And on page 7, lose the apostrophe in “wear’s.”
Good luck in the competition!
Comment from Sunshineblonde
Time: July 25, 2008, 7:24 pm
I loved the story! It kept me interested all the way to the end. I liked the banter between the characters. You used good descriptives throughout the story. It is nice to actually get the story to come alive visually in your head.
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